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:	post by MarkFuckingRichards at 2007-04-20 21:59:21

i'm tellin ya, those smudge lines take away from the quality of that piece. if those were fixed, that would perfect the piece.

and i also agree that the title would look good down the bottom, maybe with a dropped shadow to make it pop from the background. right now, the balance is off. the key to good art/design is composition. the illustration itself is well balanced, but the placement of the logo and title cause the weight of the piece to shift in an awkward manner. if i was the graphic designer in this situation, i would put the title centered, about 1/4"-1/2" from the bottom. i would also shrink the logo just a bit and either keep it in the same general region, or center it perfectly. like mike said, just my 2 cents...but i spent a shitload more than 2 cents on a fucking degree in this shit, heh heh heh.

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